Beautifully made! Bravo man! 👏 Only a couple of things I would do to improve, since you're asking for critics... 1. Verse #1 has the same amount of power as Drop #1... An easy solution is to keep less of the subbass or even just switching your kick to a less impactful one. (you can add progressive percs if you feel like it now) Ahun there will be enough air to make the upcoming drop sound super big! I love your drop but it needs to stand out from the beginning. 2. Please please get rid of the two kicks on the pre-drop fill #1! The pre-drop fill #1 will be almost empty when you remove the kicks... So use tom fills 😃 3. The riser has nice elements, but it still needs more of that slow elevation. So get a high pass filter on some of your tracks, including drums keza drag the filter throughout the last 3 bars of the riser. Then immediately turn off the filter through the last bar (pre-drop fill). Do this for both risers. Keza reduce the bass elements for riser #1. 4. I don't know how or where you got the vocals, but there's some mixing and mastering that you need to do. This is complicated stuff but you will get the hang of it once you realize what's too loud or what needs to be compressed. I'm currently listening to this on my headphones 🎧 Again, you've done a super fire job here man! 🔥